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The life styles of humanities is a reflection in reading and writing made by two teenage girls named Quevada and Octavia which they talk about their past exprience and struggles they faced to become better readers and writers.They have grown from the destraction and other things that was going on around them.Which made them become two of the most greatest soon to be 9th grade readers and writers you have laid your eyes on.HERE'S THEIR STORY.......

Wednesday, June 17, 2009

The Writing mind Of TAY


In 5th grade I always loved to write. That was just something I was always good at so whenever my teachers would say we are doing writing work shop I would be the first person with my notebook in front of my desk. Sometimes it would look like I was the only excited one in the room I never got why that was. But I think the kids in my class came around to see that writing could be fun.
Then when I was in 6th grade it just wasn't the same as when I was in 5th grade. It felt like it always became an everyday thing and the paragraphs had to be longer and we had to write about one thing and then had to move on to something else. Then that's when I told myself that it gets harder because i'm becoming a better writer then when I was in 5th grade.
So that's when I started to do more in my writing so that it can challenge me so I wasn't the one still writing 1 or 2 paragraphs I was writing 2 and 3 page essays and reports. So i'm proud to say that today in 8th grade in the year 2009 my writing is great because my writing in 8th grade is different because when I go into high school i'm not going to get the same help that i've got since I was in 6th grade it's going to be all on me and making sure that it gets done on time
For example one way that my writing had grown since 8th grade is when my class did that Great Depression and how people came here seeking a better life style. And some of the struggles they faced when they came here in order to get where they wanted to be in life. Also how this was on the SS TEST and I had to take everything I learned about the Great Depression and use it to help me on the SS TEST.
When it's all said and done I plan to take everything I learned from here and take it with me into high school and everything I learn from high school I will take that with me into college and become the world's greatest writer of all time.

2 comments:

Reena Shah said...

I know how you feel I felt like that happened to me in the past I also like the way you compared your self in different grades that is amazing other people would have lied about it good job but you mad a mistake in the first paragraph

Kala said...

I think the cartoon is funny. I like that you are specific in your posts.